Feedback of final piece

• 'Not my cup of tea, not one I would want to watch and didn't capture my imagination.'
• 'Really wanted to know what happened, had a feeling something terrible was going to happen.'
• 'Very girly, had a strong mise en scene and realistic.'
• 'Liked the bouncy feel of the slowed down make up shots, was upbeat which matched the mood well. The final shot could've been a bit punchier.'
• 'Didn't get across the point of the night out.'
• 'Was lively, colourful and matched a young team movie really well. Wanted to see more to see whether it was upbeat or whether there was going to be dark twist.'
• 'Was quite cheesy! The picture shot worked really well but i didn't know whether the car shot was relevant or it could've ended on the camera shot.
• 'Looks fun!'
• 'Looks nice and fun and a good girly film. Like the lip shot and the camera shot a lot! Looks swish.'
• Excellent! Lots of suspense.'
• 'Has lots of potential.'
• 'The camera shot was effective.'
• 'The colouring look good and effective.'
• 'Had the wrong feeling for it's genre. Could tell that it intended to be happy/positive but felt negative.
• 'The camera on camera was a good idea.'
• 'Good fun, more lighthearted and had an upbeat pace and feel.'
• 'Really good opening.'
• 'Loved the shots of the close-ups.'
• 'Looks fun!'

Overall the comments were very positive and it seems that most people got the feel of the opening and understood what was happening. The points about it not being their cup of tea were equally relevant but I don't think they are something to worry too much about as they may not have been our target audience and we were never going to please every single person with the opening.